
Lexi stood before the mirror she’d washed dishes in front of for nearly twenty years, the lead-glass fractured like the torn-up roots of a marriage too tired to mend.
The room around her hung heavy with silence, thick with the debris of dinners ruined, apologies swallowed, and a life she was ready to leave behind.
Her fingers trembled as she raised the camera, the flicker of voices- flat and emotionless, folded deep within the mirror’s reflection- this was more than a snapshot- it was a prophecy, a final chapter in the story of the life she was about to leave behind.
She clicked the shutter, capturing herself exactly as she was- caught between who she’d been and who she was presently becoming- and the mirror held that moment like a portal stitched from time, stood ready to unfasten her.
With one last glance, Lexi turned from the reflection and stepped through the door behind her as the past folded in on itself like windblown laundry, and the path ahead beckoned- clear, wild, alive.
She didn’t look back- this photograph would be the last of the life she’d left behind, and the first as she crossed over the threshold into a life wholly her own.
This post is my response to the photo prompt offered this week on WDYS #301, the word: Flat as offered this week on Six Sentence Story and the 12 words offered this week on the Sunday Whirl. Those words were: voices time story debris present travel lead doors roots prophecy last mirror
Oh wow, I love this story, Violet. Great storytelling and a great surreal ending.
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Thank you, Suzette 😊
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You are most welcome, Violet. Cheers.
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a wonderfully woven vignette of escape —-
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Thank you, John 😊
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Wonderful take Violet!
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Thank you 😊
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Pleasure always Violet
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That’s an interesting point, Violet, that photos often are snapshots of transitional points. So good!
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Thank you 😊
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Great story about transformation and courage.
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Thank you so much 😊
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You’re so welcome, my friend.
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Oh, I love the ending twist on Lexi’s life. Your writing is spot on, Violet
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Thank you, Hazel😊
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It’s always my pleasure, Violet. Happy weekend!
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Nice phrase: “the past folded in on itself like windblown laundry”
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Sometimes crossing the threshold comes after a mirror reflection.
Silently strong ink, Jodi.
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You make an excellent point!
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beautifully written!
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Thank you so much!
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What a very beautifully written story Violet. I loved the play of words as you described her state of mind. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you, Sadje.
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My pleasure
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Great story!!
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Thanks, Chris!
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You weave a wonderfully written bitter-sweet story, Violet. Incredible imagery. I felt her pain, loss, but also her hope for a new fresh start.
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Thank you Brenda.
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I hope she found what she was looking for.
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Me too. Thanks Mimi.
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Wonderful take, Violet.
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Thank you!
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virtuous effort to help others to believe that change can be clean (if not neat) and certain (if not shying away from the moment)
(about to type, ‘would that it was that simple’ once again the chains (we all) fashion holding ourselfs to what has always been, are made of us and therefore we tend to get used to their weight… better I say ‘simple but not easy’
good Six yo
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Nothing worthwhile is ever easy is it. Thanks, Clark.
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I hope she gets exactly what she’s looking for. Kudos to her for moving forward, it’s not easy
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No- leaving is never easy- so I wish her the best.
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I pray the best for her.
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It takes strength to move forward from bad situations. Bravo to Lexi.
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I agree!
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Great story, Violet! I feel her hope in your ending.
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Thank you so much 😊
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If it were only that simple! Well maybe after the children have grown and left the house.
Beautiful and relatable reflection!
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Thank you, Liz.
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I hope that path is kinder to her than her past. Beautifully written, Jodi! 💞💞💞
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Me too! Thanks!
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