
He kept moving- because motion was the only thing keeping the full weight of what he’d done from crushing him.
All he could see was the face of the innocent victim, bruised and broken, eyes wide with terror, lips frozen in a scream that was too scared to escape. No. It had not been his business- but he had put a stop to the perpetrator’s violence anyway. The law would call it murder, but his code called it necessary.
Through the trees, he spotted a run-down old shack, gutted, yes- but a promise of dry floor and brief reprieve. His body ached for it, every muscle screaming for rest.
But he could not let desire cage him. Shelter meant a trap waiting to close.
He hesitated, chest heaving, then turned away.
For now he’d have to keep moving- to outrun what they would say he’d become.
Each step offered him both penance and proof- that some wrongs can only be righted by acts that the law would never allow to go unpunished.

This is my response to the photo offered this week on Crimson’s Creative Challenge #058– I used both the one offered and bonus shot of the same- as I thought they made marvelous bookends.
Creepin’ me out, woman!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Girl he saved some poor woman and I think he did the right thing – law be damned! 😁
LikeLiked by 1 person
I would love a part two 🤗
I am on the edge of my seat here.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’ll have to see if I’m led down this path again….
LikeLiked by 1 person
Murder rescue.
Let him be
LikeLiked by 1 person
Exactly. Some things just need to be done.
LikeLike
He did the right thing, but as you said, “…some wrongs can only be righted by acts that the law would never allow to go unpunished.”
LikeLiked by 1 person
I don’t know why they punish people who act in defense of themselves or others….
LikeLike
Sometimes justice is harsh, from all angles. (K)
LikeLike
Last sentence… enough said.
Brava, Jodi.
LikeLiked by 1 person
No good deed goes unpunished- eh Nick?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great choice of story to go with the two images. A Josey Wales type dude 😎👏
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Darryl.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I hope he gets immunity if he gets caught
LikeLiked by 1 person
Me too! Seems like the ones actively defending someone always get prison time though….
LikeLike
A most interesting piece. Have you read The Green mile by Stephen king. It explores this topic.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I absolutely have! You just discussed it recently. Wonderful book – good movie too.
LikeLike
Yes, I did. That’s why it’s fresh in my mind.
LikeLiked by 1 person
A very interesting take on the prompt 💜🍁🍂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Good and suspenseful story.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Sadje.
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure 💖🫶🏼
LikeLiked by 1 person
Those photos-that house in the woods😱Watched the Evil Dead this week, so that’s freakin’ me out . . .
LikeLiked by 1 person
Gotta thank Crispina for the excellent photos! She aways comes through!
LikeLiked by 1 person
He did what he needed to do. Let him be.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m with you girl!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Justifiable homicide, I’d call it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
So would I. Thanks for dripping by, Keith.
LikeLike
Very nice, Violet.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Mary.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love that you’ve used both views of that hut. It really works. A picture writes a thousand words… and you’ve slotted the exact right story between the two ends
LikeLiked by 1 person
Both photos were do great I just had to use them. Thank you.
LikeLike
I’ve read a few books where the law seemed quiet unjust to those who were only wanting to ‘help’.
Perhaps this charactor can find a home, and peace – somewhere…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Think of how many people are in prison for killing people that abused their children, family member etc.. the numbers are staggering!
LikeLiked by 1 person
What is even worse are those that got …away.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Fantastic tale, Jodi! I hope he can find peace somehow, somewhere.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Me too 😄
LikeLiked by 1 person