CCC #59
She placed a crown of candles
Upon her cinder colored head
Lit them all quite brightly
Slipped into her sea of downy bed
The fires of passion
Alas re-lit
She closed her tired eyes
Tonight she’d say hello again
She was so tired of goodbyes.
This was inspired by this weeks photo prompt on Crimson’s Creative Challenge.
Very interesting take in the photo.
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Thank you Sadje. I have no idea why this turned out so odd looking in reader. I assure anyone who sees this I did not intent the words to align with the side of the photo, and they don’t if you look at the blog page itself. Hmmm…….
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Nice one Violet. I rarely use the reader. I’d rather see the full effect of the Artists work and arrangement. Also any options the writer is giving such as related pages. I say, if you’re in such an all f’ing hurry then use the reader or jam a like in notifications. When I’m notified of a string of likes from a “Reader” in the space of seconds or minutes I know they’re just “Being Nice” plus it clogs my email. It’s irritating! Who needs a superficial like? I’ve had a few of those over time and I just think “Awe thanks for nothing.”
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You are so right Jen. I get a resounding number of likes from people I am sure like everything that comes up in their reader and never really open the posts let alone read them.
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Excellent policy Jen. I used to love Google reader for exactly that reason.
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Some posts are just too long to read. I get that. But don’t put a string of likes on several just because of stats or something. I’m sorry but I’m being honest.
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I open ’em and I like this one a lot
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I know you do and I thank you for that….
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Like your take, J. Read it twice… once for the rhythm, once for the meaning. 🙂
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It really spoke these words to me. Loved this prompt!
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The church itself enchanted me. And for it to still use candles for lighting… don’t find many like that
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What a wonderful take on the prompt, Violet!
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I like this a lot, Violet! 🙂
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Thank you so much Na’ama.
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