Midnight maneuver
interrupted. Snow stacked, path
vanished. Door won’t budge.
A Senryu, written for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday #synonyms only for the words Game and Trouble. My choices are italicized.
Midnight maneuver
interrupted. Snow stacked, path
vanished. Door won’t budge.
A Senryu, written for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday #synonyms only for the words Game and Trouble. My choices are italicized.
I though, “How wintry, with a solemn backdrop of fear.” Then I looked at the photo and thought, “Ohh, that’s not the kind of ‘back drop’ that’s happening in THIS poem!”
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Oh, the days of the outside privy. Must have been hell in the ice and snow. 🙂
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LOL! What a delightful Senryu! Violet, this is brilliant! ❤
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Thank you Colleen
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