Left perched upon a parapet, this mortuary mine.
I weep Poseidon’s saline tears, ‘neath a somber scudding sky.
As moisture inundated clouds, exhale Sedna’s plankton perfumed breath.
And agitated arctic gales, pass o’re her frozen lips.
Left anchored in abandon, aloft this landlocked margin of death.
Inflicted fallen fortress turned, skeletal black crows nest.
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Posted for Girlie on the Edge’s Blog Six Sentence Story, cue word Perch.
Following Clark’s lead from a couple of weeks back and taking a poetic turn on the prompt, I made what I consider much better use of a line idea I first used in another poem I called Despised Conundrum.
interesting word choices and salt-laden dank images, love the poem. 🙂
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OOo thank you!
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Reblogged this on Writing, events, competitions and even some self-penned bits and commented:
Gaze upon the beauty to be found in these 50 shades of grave.
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Like that tag line!!! Thank you!
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Sedna, goddess of the sea. I am forever learning as I read your poetry.
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Glad to be of service Len
I love knowledge.
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Utterly enchanting.
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Thank you Cubby.
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Violet, you are amazing. Are you going to publish something?
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I publish something every time I post. I’m good with that. But I love knowing it pleases you!! 😄
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I’m sure it’s not just me. Just think about doing it official-like, will you?
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If someone offers me money to publish something, I promise you I’ll think seriously… 😉
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Ha! Good answer!
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So glad you took a poetic turn this week. I really like this! Especially –
“Left anchored in abandon, aloft this landlocked margin of death.”
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Thanks Girlie!
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Excellent! I can see it . Great six!
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ok…
cut it out.*
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* a compliment
like (and perhaps skewed) minds often think alike**
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** and…and! as the Doctrine tells us… a lot. (certain personality types spend more time in they heads than do the other two.)
Good Six, yo
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Well I am def one of those thst do… Thanks Clark!
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Oh! I love this and such a great beat.
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Thank you Lisa!
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A tale so sad, the fate of many a ship — wonderfully done!
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Thanks Mimi
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Woa, nicely done. Consistent image, persistent beat… like especially ‘anchored in abandon’.
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Thank you D.
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