Whet

What follows is an example of a Quintain written in response to the formed poetry challenge on dVerse, utilizing the word prompts from FOWC – fluid (a day late I admit) and the Wacky Weekend Challenge – explosion.  -Oh, and about the subject matter, that’s all dVerses fault.

Rivulets of whispering sweat
Fluidly tracing sinew taut
Limbs and loins aching longings whet
Convulsive carnal release sought
Explodes with risk of being caught


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15 thoughts on “Whet

  1. Oh my. You had me at “Rivulets of whispering sweat”. That is a killer opening.

    This poem is so exquisite that I felt like I accidentally intruded upon a couple.

    I think my glasses steamed up!

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